Kourtnei

Dear Jessica Abel and other contributors,

I am writing this letter to you because I want to let you know what I thought about your book, //Life Sucks//. There are a lot of thoughts that I had from reading this book. I just want to explain my reasons for giving you this feedback. The way that you finished writing book should have another version to it because I don't think it needs end like that. Hopefully, the things I say, you will take them into consideration and think about revising your next book. The first thing I want to let you know is that you each did a good job by the way you put a connection to writing this book. It's like you wanted to write this book based from what goes on in reality. I like how you talk about the main haracter, Dave, from beginning to end showing that he went through many situations where he couldn't handle it. In life, we deal with things where we don't get what we always want. Dave wanted to have the perfect life, but it was really boring. He had a job where he would only work nights and he felt like he was in love with the girl he met, Rosa. Everybody has someone they want to be with, but they can't get a step closer because there is always someone to stop them in their tracks. I also like how this book easily show how some teenagers can act when they're trying to get with someone. They will be the first ones to relate to this book because it's from their perspective and they would know how to deal with it. After finishing this book, I had some dislikes about a couple of things. One thing I didn't like was when Wes made it seem like he could get any girl that he wanted. The way he treated Rosa didn't make any sense because he was taking advantage of her or getting at Dave just to make him mad. He should not have brought two or girls in the same place where her and Dave were eating. All of that made Wes character made out to be like he didn't care about anyone. Another part I dislike is the way that you ended the book. I think it should have been more to it, than finishing it with the boy asking for a job and becoming a vampire too. I felt like the book was going to start like the beginning all over again, but kind of similar to it. That's why I want to know if you're going to add another version to it because I think that will be the best thing. The only thing that I would like for you to improve is the end of the book. I still think that it needs another version to it. It wouldn't seem right leave it as the boy getting bit in the dark and getting the job. The same thing happened with Dave and I feel like it will go the same way. When the new boy starts the job, something different has to happen where I don't think that something is going to be the same way. If you do another version of this book, you should give it a different title to where it will catch my attention right on hand. I know that you and your contributors can make this happen if you put another topic where more people can relate to. This will help you get more readers to grasp the concept quicker than it being about something that will lose their focus. Thank you for taking the time to listen to my opinion about the book. I hope you take into consideration what I have said about your book. It turned out to be a great book and I want the next book to be a little different, but in a similar way. This time I think you're going to have many people that will read it because they want to find out what's going to happen with the next character. I can't wait to read the next that you're going to write.

Sincerely, Kourtnei Bryant